第一步：确立观点
段落：It is a group ofrelated sentencesthat developonemain idea.
观点句：直接，清晰，概要（可展开）。
例题：
科技让人们彼此更隔离而不是更亲近。
Technology actually isolates people instead of bringing them closer.
第二步：合理展开：
多样：类比，对比，引用数据，给出图表，各种举例描写，who, what, when, why, or how.
最基本公式：因果（说服+说明）+例子（描写+陈述）
随着人们关注用科技让自己更便利，更多时间花在了人机互动上，就减少了和人的沟通。例如，工厂不需要工人了，操作员管理机器而非工人，效率提高了，但是同事数量减少了。
As people focus more on how to use technology to improve their lives, more time will be put on input orders or the operation of machines instead of communicating with human helpers. For example, some factories stop using workers to finish tasks and operators will manage machines rather than workmen. Indeed, the productive efficiency could be enhanced, but the number of working colleges will be greatly reduced for a man.
第三步：验证：
逻辑上是否能证明观点，有没有例外？有
但是也要看到，对于远程的人际交往，科技是有助力的。比如用wechat可以和国外的朋友通讯。
Of course, we should note that technology does play important role in communicating with people far away, like people could easily touch a foreign friend with WeChat.
修正观点：所以在面对远方朋友时，科技还是有一定帮助的，但是相对周边亲近的朋友家人而言，并非如此。
Therefore，technology may help people contact those living in distant places, but it is not the case for most of their friends or family members who live nearby.
这样写出的文章就是辨证的，经得起批判阅读考验的。不空洞。
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