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第一段写法示例
It is a meaningful picture showing in sigh. Doing all he can, a runner is getting to the goal at top speed dripping wet with sweat. Judging by the Chinese characters both in front of the finish line and on the bottom of the drawing, we can know the cartoon tells us that this goal is not the final point but a new jumping-off point.

注意标点，特别是统领句后面的几个句子，不要轻易用句号隔开。如：
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a boy, wearing sweat on his face, is running towards the finishing line. （此处用句号就与第一句话的意思断开了，可以用分号）改为——
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a boy, wearing sweat on his face, is running towards the finishing line；on one side of the finishing line signs “end point”, and on the other side of it, we can read “starting point”.