自己用英语写的日记，希望有人改错。

英语中没有冒号， 应换成逗号

Nobody 陪me to study dancing这句话完全不对，No one expect to learn dancing with me

Can you应换成Could you please或Will you

too many 换成so many

陪伴accompany或in company with

continue

惶恐afraid,anxious

I won't do it改成I beg for your understanding

答应promise

Why do all people pick up me only when they are  under the shadow of their own

Why do I never have  courage to exclude the others

楼上回答比较多的两位我都看了，或多或少都有不妥的地方。恕我直言，文章本身价值就不高，我是在尽量给你把语句改成不chiglish，写完后，自己翻译一下，不觉得这样的作文很触动笑点吗？多看看优秀作文吧，写作文需要结构的，把句子写正确，其次才是语法，词汇。

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