请求把歌曲sleeping sun的意境由灰暗的改成光明的

黑暗或光明仅在施主的一念之间~~阿弥陀佛

i wish for this night-time
to end in a sun rise
the glowing days around me
shine as a solar sea
oh how i wish to ascend with the sun
gleaming
beaming
with you

sorrow has a human heart
from my god it will depart
i'd sail before a thousand moons
to the sun where my heart belongs

two hundred twenty-two swirling nights
will be desired by the light
a moment for the poet's play
until there's nothing left to say

只能这样了。其他不用改。很别扭啊。人家哥特本来就是黑暗的。还偏要改成光明的...

这个够完美的了啊..你读一下看是不是既通顺又押韵?其余的部分其实是中性的啊，退一万步讲,也只有我会来帮你干这个事了..我说别扭是因为歌曲本身的性质啊

改了还是这首歌吗？