求英语厉害的帮忙翻译几个句子，先谢谢了！

A:下班后你当我的人质吧！Be
my
hostage
after
work!
B:Why
not!没问题！
A:都别动，人质在我手上！Don't
move,
I
have
hostage!
B:Help~救命啊。
C:请问你为什么要干掉人质？Tell
me
why
did
you
kill
the
hostage?
D:因为我救过她N次了。Because
I
saved
her
many
times
already.

问题补充：A:下班后你当我的人质吧！
My
hostage
you
will
be
after
work!
B:Why
not!
A:都别动，人质在我手上！
Stop
moving!
I
am
having
the
hostage!
B:Help~
C:请问你为什么要干掉人质？
May
I
know
why
you
shot
the
hostage?!
D:因为我救过她N次了。
Because
I
have
rescued
her
so
many
times!

你好 ！我的译句如下 ：
A:下班后你当我的人质吧！
Play the role of my hostage after work !
B:Why not!
为什么不呢？
A:都别动，人质在我手上！
Don’t move, the hostage is on my possession !
B:Help~
救命啊 ！
C:请问你为什么要干掉人质？
I wonder if you want to finish them off ?
D:因为我救过她N次了。
Because I’ve saved her many times.