「讲座介绍」
从3月开始,申请生将正式步入文书创作阶段,梳理素材、挖掘亮点、整理思路、下笔成文。写完一段之后,感觉思路挖掘完善,内容搭建合理,这段文字应该已经可以定稿了。可是,怎么读都觉得差点味道,一行行叙述中透着窒息般的平淡。这样的平淡应该如何打破?
如果申请是一场无声辩论战,那么修辞的运用,就是无形的刀光剑影,助你在展自我展现的赛场上,披荆斩棘,觅得胜利。 那么,修辞的“军械库”中,都有哪些屡试不爽的“兵器”?如何对缺乏辨识度、近乎“弹尽粮绝”的文书进行“有效补给”? 使用这些“弹药”的同时,又要注意哪些“潜规则”来避免擦枪走火,伤及自身?
本周开始TD将带领您进入创意写作工坊,就让我们来一起摇曳进岁月沧桑,探究“修辞”这门学问,学习如何化平庸为神奇, 真正助力你的文书创作。
「句子详情」
1. She is like a beautiful flower.
She is a beautiful flower.
This beautiful flower attracted everyone's attention in the prom
She is as beautiful as a meteor shower
2. Many retirees are coach potatoes who enjoy popping cold beers in front of the TV.
3. My teacher and I are on the " same frenquency range
4. Billion dollars was siphoned off in the loan scandal, about which all attempts of investigation were stonewalled.
5. He was an individual who marched to the beat of a different drummer. marched to the beat of a different drummer
6. He was an individual who marched to the beat of a different drummer.
7. His anemic writing bored readers
8. Violence has dulled the luster of the Big Apple, and we need to prevent it from rotting to the core.
9. This city is a citadel of the football dynasty.
10.Networks have washed over like a tsunami, dramatically altering the architecture of computing.
11. Alcoholism, drugs, dropouts and prison times largely composed his resume.
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