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Red 的原文
My name is Wang Yi-yang, and my English name is Red. I come from China, I participate in this work and travel program for many reasons. First of all, I would like to broaden my horizons, to see the world outside and experience the different cultures and customs. Second if I can successfully come to USA and work for a few month, I will get a very valuable oversea experience. This experience will be very helpful for me in the future. Third, as we know, the USA is a very beautiful country, everybody wants to travel there and me too. After I finish my job, I’ll take some time to travel around. I would like to go to Las Vegas and Los Angeles. My friend told me that these two cities are particularly awesome. About my work experience, I used to work in the Apple shop for two summer vacations. That was 2008 and 2009 mainly to introduce and sell Apple products to the customers. Last summer I worked on a music radio, mainly to choose the songs that played on the radio and this summer vacation, I hope that I can work in the USA. That must be cool and interesting. I have a lot of hobbies such like sports especially soccer and reading, movie and music. Well, this is my basic information. I hope to see you soon. Bye-bye.
经过Mr. Wong修改的正确版
总结:
非常清晰的呈现,虽有一些语法的错误但是不影响理解,非常好!
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透明的海域
声音语速正好 太快了会让人觉得跟不上
透明的海域
找不到141 142
1526315xjvm 回复 @透明的海域:
我也是
天涯倦客_6j
好多废话
听友136650483
老师的语速好慢,中文也好慢,然后加了倍速,感觉好奇怪,毕竟声音比较台湾腔
Banana小朋友
老师...多余话可适当删一点
学英语环游世界 回复 @Banana小朋友:
有些话是说给有缘人听的~ 可以快转~