请教一下这句话语法有问题吗?

2022-11-18 11:55

Standing on the beach is a little girl, stooping to pick up the garbage thrown on the sand, the basket on her back filled with plastic boxes.
2022-11-18 14:55
对,正常的陈述语序应该是make sb….这里是被动语态,相当是把sb 提前了,变成sb be made
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有应该修改为A little girl is standing on the beach
仔细看语法不算有太大问题,但确实有点古怪、啰嗦,建议调整一下分句的顺序和少数用词:
The
most
important
reason
is
that
novels
can
reflect
real
life,
just
as
an
old
saying
goes:
a
novel
is
a
walking
mirror.
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