英语作文，20分 “写作业听音乐”

Listening to Music while Doing Homework
As we know,music can relax us.What's more,the popular music can make us cozy.Somebody like listening to music while doing homework,it is good or not?
In my opinion,listening to music while doing homework disturb us to finish homework.First of all,while we are doing homework,we focus our ***.music will disturb our attentions.Secondly,listening to music while doing homework will decrease our memory.Finally,the examination room is very silence,there is no music for you.
with regard to the above,listening to music is harmful while we are doing homework.

translation of composition:
作文的翻译:
边听音乐边做作业
众所周知,音乐可以使我们放松.甚至流行音乐能使我们感到舒适.有些人喜欢边边听音乐边做作业,这好吗?
依我所看,边听音乐边做作业会打扰我们完成作业.,当我们做作业的时候,我们会集中思维.音乐会干扰我们的注意力.第二,边听音乐边做作业会降低我们的记忆力.第三,考场是非常安静的,没音乐给你.
关于以上所说的,边听音乐边做作业对我们有害.