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作者：保蕾 | 朗读：Elaine葉

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First, a decent paycheck would enhance teachers’ motivation. They have to spend hours studying material, doing research and working on presentations before class to get fully prepared. And right after class there will be questions to be answered and papers to be graded, all of which takes great patience and persistence. Naturally, some may argue that such effort does not equal to that of life-saving duties in the ER or evidence-citing moments in the courtroom. But let’s look at this issue more closely, education is just equally, if not more, important than other fields. Can you imagine how our children will turn out to be if they are being guided by people who don’t take pride in what they do or who think their job is less respectable? Not only do good teachers impart knowledge, but they also pass on important values to the next generation. Who can deny the value of an educator who tries to help a juvenile delinquent get back on track? And who can make light of a teacher who manages to inspire an introvert who shows promise in painting to pursue arts? But it cannot be possible without giving these educators due respect and credit. Only when they are held in high regard will they start to show a better performance at wo

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enhance one’s motivation提高某人的积极性，也可以说motivate sb to do

这个词组接近于前两天交给他们的offer sb incentive to do,记得吗？

decent 体面的  adj.

a decent job 体面的工作

a decent man 高尚品格的人

prepare for class 的细节

studying material, doing research and working on presentations

查资料，做研究，准备课件

teaching duty 的细节

questions to be answered and papers to be graded

有问题要回答，有作业要批改

Naturally,… But… 当然...但其实…

段内的让步，为了更好的进攻

可能有人会说这些努力不及医生和律师，但！重点在但是后面。所以转折后是重头戏，要能自圆其说。为了不显得太过于生硬，转折后还需要用几句话来解释为什么我还是觉得教书的重要性和律师医生比有过之而无不及。

efforts entailed by other professions 的细节

Doctors: life-saving duties in the ER(emergency room)

Lawyers: evidence-citing moments in a courtroom

look at this issue more closely仔细分析这个问题= take a closer look

此句常常用于转折后，但是你仔细分析呢你会发现...

请现在边朗读边尝试口述填入正确的词语。

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First, a ______ (体面的) paycheck would enhance teachers’ motivation. They have to spend hours __________, _________ and ________________ (细节：查资料，做研究，准备课件) before class to get fully prepared. And right after class there will be _____________ and ________________ (细节：有问题要回答，有作业要批改), all of which takes great patience and persistence. ______， （当然，表让步） some may argue that such effort does not equal to that of life-saving duties in the ER or evidence-citing moments in the courtroom. But ________________ (让我们来仔细探讨这个问题), education is just equally, if not more, important than other fields. Can you imagine how our children will ______ （结果，最后变得） to be if they are being guided by people who don’t __________ (以…为骄傲) what they do or who think their job is less respectable? __________ (不但) good teachers _______ (传授教授) knowledge, __________ (而且) pass on important values to the next generation. Who can deny the value of an educator who tries to help a __________ (少年犯) __________ (重归正轨)? And who can __________ (轻视) a teacher who manages to inspire an introvert who __________ （在...方面显示出前途） painting to pursue arts? But it cannot be possible without giving these educators due respect and credit. Only when they are __________ (被重视) will they start to show a better performance at work.

现在依次把下面的表达含义在心里想一遍：

enhance one’s motivation

decent

prepare for class 的细节

teaching duty 的细节

Naturally,… But… 

efforts entailed by other professions 的细节

look at this issue more closely

turn out to be

take pride in sth

Not only do …, but they also…

impart

pass on sth to sb

juvenile delinquent

get back on track

make light of

show promise in

be held in high regard 

现在请看着中文提纲，

把这一段写出来，限时5分钟。

首先，一份体面的薪水可以提高老师的动力。他们在课前要花时间查资料，做研究还有做课件来为课程做好充分准备。而且课后还要回答问题批改作业，这些都需要极大的耐心和毅力。当然，会有人说这些努力不能对等于医生在急症室治病救人或者律师在法庭上引经据典。但是让我们来仔细分析一下这个问题，教育的重要性比起其他行业有过之而无不及。你能想象我们的孩子会变成什么样子如果教育的人不以自己所做的为骄傲或者觉得自己的工作不那么受人尊重？好的老师不单单能够教授知识，更重要的是还能传递重要的价值观给我们的下一代。谁能否认一个帮助问题少年改过自新的老师的价值？谁能轻视一个鼓励有画画天赋的内向孩子去追求艺术的老师？但这一切不可能发生如果没有给予老师应有的尊重和认可。只有当它们被重视的时候他们工作起来才会表现更好。

（有些长句你读起来中文会有些诡异，是因为中英文表达习惯的差异，为了尽量接近原文帮助你回忆和掌握英文的表达习惯，你体会一下。）

最后，请自我对照查漏补缺。

First, a decent paycheck would enhance teachers’ motivation. They have to spend hours studying material, doing research and working on presentations before class to get fully prepared. And right after class there will be questions to be answered and papers to be graded, all of which takes great patience and persistence. Naturally, some may argue that such effort does not equal to that of life-saving duties in the ER or evidence-citing moments in the courtroom. But let’s look at this issue more closely, education is just equally, if not more, important than other fields. Can you imagine how our children will turn out to be if they are being guided by people who don’t take pride in what they do or who think their job is less respectable? Not only do good teachers impart knowledge, but they also pass on important values to the next generation. Who can deny the value of an educator who tries to help a juvenile delinquent get back on track? And who can make light of a teacher who manages to inspire an introvert who shows promise in painting to pursue arts? But it cannot be possible without giving these educators due respect and credit. Only when they are held in high regard will they start to show a better performance at work.

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