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Hi everyone, I am XXX and am 16 this year. I love to read comics, listen to music and I also enjoy eating and watching television at the same time and my favourite programs are comedy shows. My wish is to try all best delicacies around the world.

Hello,everyone! My name is XXX. I am sixteen years old. My hobbies are reading comic books and listening to music. I also like to eat snacks while I watch TV. Comedies are my favorite. My dream is to eat all types of delicious foods around the world.

hello everybody. my name is .. and i'am 16 years old. i love cartoons, music, watching tv with sth to eat, and comedy is the best. my wish is to taste every delicious food in the whole world.
这样说更自然随意点吧
其他两种比较规范