“我们很高兴通知你，你可以来我们学校读书了”翻译为英文是？

第一句话是入学通知书上的话吧。官方一点的说法应该是：
We are very glad to tell you that you are admitted to our school.
第二句话是：
I want to express thanks to those who helped me.

I'm very glad to inform you that you can study in our school
We are glad to inform you that you can come to our school.
.I want to express my thanks to those who helped me.

我们很高兴通知你，你可以来我们学校读书了
We are glad to inform you that you can come to our school
我想对那些帮助过我的人表达谢意
I think that helped me to express my thanks

我们很高兴通知你，你可以来我们学校读书了
I'm very glad to inform you that you can study in our school
我想对那些帮助过我的人表达谢意
I want to express my thanks to the people who ever helped me.