Description:complex & simple_Susan三叶草_免费在线阅读收听下载

And you can be rich in description in several different ways.You can say the rain was poring down,the night was very dark. It is very plain but it is descriptive.Or y can say the rain was poring down in buckets,you would have thought it was the end of the world.It was a dark and stormy night. The gusts were billowing. The trees were whipping back and forth in a frenzy.You can add on.You can have an ornate style,which is one thing,or you can just have a lot of concrete objects,sounds and smells,which aren't necessarily described with adjectives.They are more likely to be nouns.So detail need not necessarily be adjectival detail. You can say there was a fork a spoon a knife a plate a cup and a rose in a small cut glass vase. There is one adjective in all of that. It's"small". In my own work I usually subtract.So I pare down somewhat rather than adding things in.
你可以用几种不同的方式丰富描述。你可以说雨下得很大，夜很黑。这很简单，但很有描述性。或者你可以说大雨倾盆而下，你认为这就世界末日。那是一个漆黑的暴风雨之夜。狂风巨浪。这些树疯狂地来回摆动。你可以加进去。你可以有华丽的风格，这是一方面，或者你可以只是有很多具体的物体，声音和气味，不一定用形容词来描述。它们只是名词。所以细节不一定是形容词性的细节。你可以说在一个小的玻璃花瓶里有一把叉子、一把勺子、一把小刀、一个盘子、一个杯子和一朵玫瑰花。所有这些只有一个形容词。是“小”。在我自己的工作中，我通常做减法。我减少一些东西，而不是增加东西。

Description:complex & simple

Description:complex & simple

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